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| Uploading our film trailer to youtube I collected feedback from peers in my class and from friends from this I constructed a wordie with represents some of the words that were used to summarise our film trailer. |
Showing posts with label Peer Feedback. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Peer Feedback. Show all posts
Sunday, 10 March 2013
Trailer Feedback
Sunday, 10 February 2013
Peer Feedback
Today I asked my two peers if they could give me more feedback on my blog, this was my third peer feedback and vitally one of the most important peer feedback posts as it involves a great depth of research and planning.
Dow- " It is clear that in terms of research you have gone into a great depth on both film poster examples and magazine front covers. This will really help you when producing both your film poster and magazine front cover. Make sure you post about the variety of colours you experimented with in your magazine front cover and the planning of pictures for your film poster. I like the way you have researched different types of magazines, why not write a post about why you chose one over the other? Overall you are making excellent progress"
Kassie- "Looks like you addressed my detail improvement idea, your research is clear and with a good use of pictures all posts are fantastically presented. Your planning is also very good you have covered most aspects that needed to be spoken about when filming and editing your film trailer, although you haven't done a post about costume ideas maybe this would be a good idea? Although your blog is looking very good"
Dow- " It is clear that in terms of research you have gone into a great depth on both film poster examples and magazine front covers. This will really help you when producing both your film poster and magazine front cover. Make sure you post about the variety of colours you experimented with in your magazine front cover and the planning of pictures for your film poster. I like the way you have researched different types of magazines, why not write a post about why you chose one over the other? Overall you are making excellent progress"
Kassie- "Looks like you addressed my detail improvement idea, your research is clear and with a good use of pictures all posts are fantastically presented. Your planning is also very good you have covered most aspects that needed to be spoken about when filming and editing your film trailer, although you haven't done a post about costume ideas maybe this would be a good idea? Although your blog is looking very good"
Wednesday, 2 January 2013
Peer Feedback
This was my second piece of feedback from my peers and again I was happy with the response from my peers about my blog. All the recommended improvements from my previous peer feedback post were completed and my blog was updated.
Dow- "From reading your blog its clear you have been busy. Your posts are still really good you also have good detail and write your posts in a fluent manner. Make sure you add as much multimedia as possible in every single post you put up. Keep using a variety of features such as Wordie to display your posts in a different way. And make sure when uploading youtube videos into your blog you insert the video through youtube and don't just put a link into the post."
Kassie- "Will your blog is still very impressive. Your storyboard is good but have you stuck to it? If not do a post on the changes that you have made producing another storyboard. Think about producing an animated storyboard which you can film and will give you an idea of the length and variety of shots you will need to complete your film trailer."
Dow- "From reading your blog its clear you have been busy. Your posts are still really good you also have good detail and write your posts in a fluent manner. Make sure you add as much multimedia as possible in every single post you put up. Keep using a variety of features such as Wordie to display your posts in a different way. And make sure when uploading youtube videos into your blog you insert the video through youtube and don't just put a link into the post."
Kassie- "Will your blog is still very impressive. Your storyboard is good but have you stuck to it? If not do a post on the changes that you have made producing another storyboard. Think about producing an animated storyboard which you can film and will give you an idea of the length and variety of shots you will need to complete your film trailer."
Feedback from our initial trailer
Within class today we showed the class our initial trailer. We asked for one thing they liked about the trailer and one thing they did ike about the trailer.
Alex- " I like the title sequence at the beginning, it looks good"
- "I dont like the fact you haven't got much dialogue"
Dan- "I like the contrast between some shots of light and dark"
- "I dont like the title in the clouds at the beginning"
James- "The build up is really good, your music is excellent"
- "some shots are filmed in different quality this makes it look not professional"
Dow- "The final scene is impressive"
- "At times some shots seem a bit out of place"
Alex- " I like the title sequence at the beginning, it looks good"
- "I dont like the fact you haven't got much dialogue"
Dan- "I like the contrast between some shots of light and dark"
- "I dont like the title in the clouds at the beginning"
James- "The build up is really good, your music is excellent"
- "some shots are filmed in different quality this makes it look not professional"
Dow- "The final scene is impressive"
- "At times some shots seem a bit out of place"
Saturday, 17 November 2012
Peer feedback on the blog
This was my first peer feedback where I asked 2 members of my class from another group to look at the context of my blog and evaluate it giving me both positive areas and areas that need to be worked on. By addressing the feedback this will improve the quality of my blog.
Dow- "Will your blog has started well. Its clear that you have done plenty of detailed research into the process that producing a film takes. I like the fact that you have done several case studies on different films from different genres- from this you could write a post about narrowing down your options for you selected genre of your film trailer. Your what makes a trailer post needs to be re arranged as you have different fonts and different sizes within the post."
Kassie- "Will your blog looks excellent. I love the fact you have used different features to present your work. Although some your posts are vague and you are missing out key parts of information within the post for example your target audience post you need to refer more to certification and the impact this will have on your film trailer. Your pitch is good from this have you had any further reflection? if so why not write a post about it."
Dow- "Will your blog has started well. Its clear that you have done plenty of detailed research into the process that producing a film takes. I like the fact that you have done several case studies on different films from different genres- from this you could write a post about narrowing down your options for you selected genre of your film trailer. Your what makes a trailer post needs to be re arranged as you have different fonts and different sizes within the post."
Kassie- "Will your blog looks excellent. I love the fact you have used different features to present your work. Although some your posts are vague and you are missing out key parts of information within the post for example your target audience post you need to refer more to certification and the impact this will have on your film trailer. Your pitch is good from this have you had any further reflection? if so why not write a post about it."
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