This was my first peer feedback where I asked 2 members of my class from another group to look at the context of my blog and evaluate it giving me both positive areas and areas that need to be worked on. By addressing the feedback this will improve the quality of my blog.
Dow- "Will your blog has started well. Its clear that you have done plenty of detailed research into the process that producing a film takes. I like the fact that you have done several case studies on different films from different genres- from this you could write a post about narrowing down your options for you selected genre of your film trailer. Your what makes a trailer post needs to be re arranged as you have different fonts and different sizes within the post."
Kassie- "Will your blog looks excellent. I love the fact you have used different features to present your work. Although some your posts are vague and you are missing out key parts of information within the post for example your target audience post you need to refer more to certification and the impact this will have on your film trailer. Your pitch is good from this have you had any further reflection? if so why not write a post about it."
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